Reading What I Wrote

Reading What I Wrote

Feed back about my work has been mixed lately, those that liked it read it aloud; those who didn't like it didn't. Once my poems were read aloud, those that didn't suddenly did. So, I post this advice: read my poems out loud, you might just hear something you didn't know was there...

Friday, September 6, 2013

THE Truth

Writing, writing, writing
All the time writing
Writing, writing, writing
Stop
Read
See a truth
Writing, writing, writing
Stop
Read
Is the truth still there, embedded,
Or was it somehow beheaded?
Can all readers find it, so hidden
Or do they have to be bitten?
No, I won't think of that
Writing, writing, writing
Stop
Edit
Repeat
Selling, selling, selling
All the time selling
Selling, selling, selling
Stop
Write, because that is what you do
Writing, writing, writing
Doesn't anyone see any of the truth?


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