Reading What I Wrote

Reading What I Wrote

Feed back about my work has been mixed lately, those that liked it read it aloud; those who didn't like it didn't. Once my poems were read aloud, those that didn't suddenly did. So, I post this advice: read my poems out loud, you might just hear something you didn't know was there...

Sunday, October 21, 2012


Unsure if how to proceed
Especially of how you perceive
What I write of what I think
It's enough to make me drink
But I continue even though
Because of my desire to grow
Past where I am
                            to where I want to be

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