Reading What I Wrote

Reading What I Wrote

Feed back about my work has been mixed lately, those that liked it read it aloud; those who didn't like it didn't. Once my poems were read aloud, those that didn't suddenly did. So, I post this advice: read my poems out loud, you might just hear something you didn't know was there...

Saturday, November 10, 2012

Wait a Minute....

That didn't work
Maybe this will
Start with something I know
Something real
An exciting event
or a bombed plan
Start with something I know
Something at hand

What am I saying?
Nothing.
Can't get this going
Totally blocked
All the rumbling
Am I completely xxxed?

Giving advice
Not following it
Can I be a writer
by wallowing in it?